Sunday, January 23, 2011

Week #2 - Improv Poem

A take-off on Gertrude Stein’s “Susie Asado” poem. It was hard not to try to add meaning to the phrases, and I did not really succeed; but it was fun to write.

Susie Asado

Sweet sweet sweet sweet sweet tea.
       Susie Asado.
Sweet sweet sweet sweet sweet tea.
       Susie Asado.
Susie Asado which is a told tray sure.
A lean on the shoe this means slips slips hers.
When the ancient light grey is clean it is yellow, it is a silver seller.
This is a please this is a please there are the saids to jelly. These are the wets these say the sets to leave a crown to Incy.
Incy is short for incubus.
A pot. A pot is a beginning of a rare bit of trees. Trees tremble, the old vats are in bobbles, bobbles which shade and shove and render clean, render clean must.   
       Drink pups.   
Drink pups drink pups lease a sash hold, see it shine and a bobolink has pins. It shows a nail.
What is a nail. A nail is unison.
Sweet sweet sweet sweet sweet tea.

          Florida Friday

Fun fun fun fun fun day.
     Florida Friday.
Fun fun fun fun fun day.
     Florida Friday.
Florida Friday which is a top trip found.
A ride on the plane jives with sun sun mine.
How the young sky blue is glad it is bright, it is a truthful teller.
This is a yes this is a yes there are the wins for tennis. These are the rounds these go abounds to
   play a set with Bonster.
Bonster is nick for Bonnie.
A suit. A suit is a garment for swimming in the sea. Waves wobble, the sea foam is in bubbles, bubbles which tease and tickle and shuttle air, shuttle air free.
    Zip snaps.
Zip snaps zip snaps let a cat paw, watch it giggle and a seagull drops poop. It throws a line.
What is a line. A line is twosome.
Fun fun fun fun fun day.

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