Casey,
This draft's first line starts off really well, especially "swaddler"--a great noun! It conjures "swindler" which also relates to money. The imagery of the second line evades me, unless it refers to magnets that hold the wallet together. I like your strong verbs of "shear," "display," and "provide," but I think "rides" lacks zest.
The second stanza offers good descriptions but fails to get as far off subject like Collins' poem does. But I still enjoy the whimsical tone of your draft for such a practical object as a wallet. Fun!
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