Thursday, March 3, 2011

Week #8--Improv

From John Berryman's "The Dream Songs"

1

Huffy Henry hid     the day,
unappeasable Henry sulked.
I see his point,—a trying to put things over.
It was the thought that they thought
they could do it made Henry wicked & away.
But he should have come out and talked.

All the world like a woolen lover
once did seem on Henry’s side.
Then came a departure.
Thereafter nothing fell out as it might or ought.
I don’t see how Henry, pried
open for all the world to see, survived.

What he has now to say is a long
wonder the world can bear & be.
Once in a sycamore I was glad
all at the top, and I sang.
Hard on the land wears the strong sea
and empty grows every bed.

My riff:

-1
Clepto Carrie caught    the time,
incorrigible Carrie lied,
I get her drift,—a ruse for running the show.
It was the dare that they dared
her to do that made Carrie greedy & unkind.
But she could have let go and tried.


All her dreams plush as a down pillow
used to float in Carrie’s head.
Then hit a tornado.
Subsequently everything got helter-skeltered.
It’s a miracle that Carrie, scattered
among so many, isn’t dead.

All she can manage now is to cry
quite loudly for more dreams to come.
Once on a golf course I barefoot leapt
across the green, and I got high.
Earth spins tight around mother sun
and time is all that can be kept.

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