Monday, April 4, 2011

Week #11--Response to Candis' Calisthenic

Candis,

This is an intriguing mix of statements that might be useful for a poem with a mysterious tone. Most interesting to me are lines 2-4 and 9. I hope you incorporate them into a future work and see what develops, maybe something in the voice of a multi-lingual celebrity.

Pauline

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