Kamau,
This draft offers an interesting reverse perspective of "Spidey" and includes some nice alliteration, like "condoning of confinement," "crude thoughts of calamity," and "a plan for the poor." The form of separate stanzas reads a little awkwardly to me and may reflect the "off-balance" nature of the subject matter, but I wonder if it might not sound more congruent as one verse. You could have some fun expanding on the concept of an unresponsive hero and juice this draft up even more. I suggest you go for it since you have made a great start.
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