Week #5--Improv #1

Following Jenna's critique, here's a second attempt at riffing off of Andrei Voznesensky's "Two Poems" (see Week #4)

En Suite

I

Under a bright and treeless sky

in tandem we stroll—but crow when

a Whistling Heron wings by

portending a coyote’s den.

II
 

It’s uplifting when your opponent

nets every returning ball;

but if you pound her with all aces
she will not need to swing at all.